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#1 Jesusfreak

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 02:33 AM

So, I got bored and made an attempt at poetry. Being the science geek that I am, poetry isn't exactly a talent of mine. But I wrote one anyways, and actually kinda liked it, so I'm sharing it with you guys. Anyone who's been reading my posts lately can guess the inspiration...

I'm sitting here, another lonely night.
I miss you, do you miss me too?
As much as I do, you?
Will my dreams e'er come true?
Thoughts so distracting,
From my work they're detracting.
Do you suffer this distraction?
Do you share my passion?
You should know that I'm waiting
And the picture I'm painting,
Of you and I,
In my mind's eye,
Gives me hope for tomorrow.
May it not end in sorrow.
May our hearts not be broken.
The words were unspoken.
It might not show,
But do you know?
I admit it's true,
That I love you

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 07:33 AM

How beautiful! Ian would love this.

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 01:57 PM

How beautiful! Ian would love this.

Aw, thank you! :blush: Knowing him he probably would, but he's the one person that's not allowed to see it. :rolleyes:

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 02:27 PM

How beautiful! Ian would love this.

Aw, thank you! :blush: Knowing him he probably would, but he's the one person that's not allowed to see it. :rolleyes:

Of course. I do know how that works. :lol:

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 02:50 PM

How beautiful! Ian would love this.

Aw, thank you! :blush: Knowing him he probably would, but he's the one person that's not allowed to see it. :rolleyes:

Of course. I do know how that works. :lol:

Yeah, there are only two ways he's seeing that poem. One would be if he was saved and two would be if the poem no longer applies to him. I'm hoping for the first one.

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Posted 13 December 2006 - 06:31 PM

How beautiful! Ian would love this.

Aw, thank you! :blush: Knowing him he probably would, but he's the one person that's not allowed to see it. :rolleyes:

Of course. I do know how that works. :lol:

Yeah, there are only two ways he's seeing that poem. One would be if he was saved and two would be if the poem no longer applies to him. I'm hoping for the first one.

*is mum*

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 08:31 AM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 10:33 AM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

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Posted 19 December 2006 - 10:55 PM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

Thanks! ^_^

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Posted 20 December 2006 - 12:59 AM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

Thanks! ^_^

You will have to make hard copies of these and put them away.
Just in case... :D .

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Posted 20 December 2006 - 09:09 PM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

Thanks! ^_^

You will have to make hard copies of these and put them away.
Just in case... :D .

I have. I type them up in open office (my version of word) and save them to my computer before I put them here.

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Posted 20 December 2006 - 09:54 PM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

Thanks! ^_^

You will have to make hard copies of these and put them away.
Just in case... :D .

I have. I type them up in open office (my version of word) and save them to my computer before I put them here.

I believe he will read them one day.

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Posted 21 December 2006 - 12:38 AM

*gasp* I wrote another one I deemed decent.

I'll not be a liar,
You're the object of my desire
Placed in a box
Secured with locks
I asked a Friend for the key
He said, “We shall see”

*big smile*
Soooooooooooo superb!!!

Thanks! ^_^

You will have to make hard copies of these and put them away.
Just in case... :D .

I have. I type them up in open office (my version of word) and save them to my computer before I put them here.

I believe he will read them one day.

Maybe. :rolleyes:

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Posted 31 December 2006 - 11:20 PM

I wrote another one, this one is different from the previous one's I've written.

It has been dark quite some time now.
A darkness of innocence, ignorance.
I wonder when the light will come,
If it comes
What it will look like...
I stumble about, bumping into things
But what are they?
I can feel them, but I cannot see.
I can only guess as to what they are,
Let alone why they are there
Or what purpose they serve, if any.
When will I find out? When will I know?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

I can see faint outlines now.
Shadows, hints, ideas forming in my mind.
The darkness plays tricks,
Causing me to doubt.
What if I'm wrong?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

The faint light is growing,
Things are shifting, changing.
I can see a few details now, but they are blurred, faded.
These objects serve a purpose,
That I can tell.
But what is it? When will I know?
Will I know at all?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

I can distinguish some faded colors now.
These objects seem to fit together,
But how? Why?
Are these objects meant to be mine?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

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Posted 01 January 2007 - 12:25 AM

I like this!!! :D

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Posted 01 January 2007 - 12:29 AM

I like this!!! :D

Thanks. ^_^ I just added some new lines near the beginning that I forgot about before Here's the new version:

It has been dark quite some time now,
But before I was sleeping,
So I didn't notice the darkness.
A darkness of innocence, ignorance.
I wonder when the light will come,
If it comes
What it will look like...
I stumble about, bumping into things
But what are they?
I can feel them, but I cannot see.
I can only guess as to what they are,
Let alone why they are there
Or what purpose they serve, if any.
When will I find out? When will I know?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

I can see faint outlines now.
Shadows, hints, ideas forming in my mind.
The darkness plays tricks,
Causing me to doubt.
What if I'm wrong?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

The faint light is growing,
Things are shifting, changing.
I can see a few details now, but they are blurred, faded.
These objects serve a purpose,
That I can tell.
But what is it? When will I know?
Will I know at all?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

I can distinguish some faded colors now.
These objects seem to fit together,
But how? Why?
Are these objects meant to be mine?

I'm watching, wondering, waiting...

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 12:53 AM

New poem. It's kind of a rant because our world is so messed up. I think we're all guilty of at least part of this poem...

We live in an imperfect world,
the world at our fingertips
priorities misaligned.
Work was assigned,
but the playstation is calling.
Gucci handbags, baby phat jeans,
but your baby is starving,
because you don't understand
the difference between wants and needs.
You have to buy makeup,
to have the perfect face.
But the between your ears,
does anything occupy that space?
We're told to be smarter
We're told to be stronger,
but curricula are dumbed down
as we pack on the pounds.
Another beautiful day
spent in front of televisions gray.
Who's the biggest flirt?
Who has the sexiest skirt?
What happened to modesty?
And what about honesty?
“I slammed the door in his face.”
Did you ever try holding it open?
“Because she's hot”
I hear this a lot.
Beauty changes,
but health does not.
Smoking is sexy...
Until you're in a hospital with lung cancer.
You're out to get plastered tonight
I'm passing my classes, that's right.
You heard me, and your parents, and your teachers,
And you care, but you won't admit it,
lest the guy next to you call you a “pansy.”
Why is it so much easier to say “I hate you,”
than it is to say “I love you.”
“How did the Red Sox do last night?”
Instead of “are you busy tonight?”
Afraid to share, lest we dare
to show we actually care.
Because sweetness is so often
mistaken for weakness.
But we're all guilty, everyone.
What's the point of improving?
Nobody's perfect...

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 06:20 AM

This is a very accurate portrayal of the world today.
Sad, oh so sad. When all the animals are gone, the humans will also be gone.
And they will have brought it all about themselves.

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Posted 03 January 2007 - 02:14 PM

This is a very accurate portrayal of the world today.
Sad, oh so sad. When all the animals are gone, the humans will also be gone.
And they will have brought it all about themselves.

:closedeyes:

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Posted 04 January 2007 - 06:33 PM

This one is called "Silence"

I wanted to talk,
but don't know what to say

Silence...

I got nervous,
and looked away.

Silence...

I read what you wrote,
but can't put my reaction into words

Silence...

My inability to speak,
sometimes it hurts

Silence...

I didn't want you
to misunderstand what I said

Silence...

So I kept quiet,
lest our faces turn red

Silence...




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