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#21 Kay

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Posted 06 August 2007 - 09:19 AM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

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Don't you understand? Music is poetry.
Songs are poems you sing. Poems are songs that you talk. Great grammar I have there -_-

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That was deep.
Yea I know poetry is music from the heart. But mine are all short. Have you read any of them? But I guess one that I wrote could be a song. It's just coming up with the chorus and lyrics for the bridge is kind of hard for me. idk. I just can't.......idk, I can't explain it.

Not all songs have bridges

That's true but it's still hard idk why

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 08:00 AM

I started singing randomly to myself.

Then I thought, "Hey, those lyrics are pretty good"

So I wrote them down.




On the day that we all die
The whole of the world will cry
They will ask the heavens why, oh why
Oh why must we all die?

On the day the sky turns black
The day that’s dark as night
In the throes of eternal doom
When the world’s overtaken by gloom

One will rise above the rest
A soul that withstood the test
It is He
A saviour of us all
Did he die for our sins?
I guess we’ll never know
It is You
A light in the fog
A guiding force
That helps me carry on
It is I
I carry on trough the music
I’ll be forgotten before long
But some will remember
It is Us
The world at large
When everyone dies to each other
We’ll all survive to another

On the day the deserts freeze
On the night when the polar caps melt
When the world is turned on its head
Who will get through?

It is Them
They support each other
They live together
They live on
It is She
A girl in the street
Someone you’ll never meet
But someone holds her in their soul
It is All
Though a stranger may not matter to you
They will matter to someone else
And through them they will survive

It is the People
When the world just dies
The people make it live
When we die will we survive?
When we die will we survive?
When we die will we survive?



(It doesn't really make sense at a few points, but hey, who said songs have to make sense? As long as they sound good... :P)

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 08:18 AM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!


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Posted 05 September 2007 - 09:39 AM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

Um. Thanks. :P

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 03:38 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 05:20 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

Glad you scrolled. Hopefully I would never be that mean.
Of course, the way I put the space was kind of mean and evil. :rolleyes:

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 09:05 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

Glad you scrolled. Hopefully I would never be that mean.
Of course, the way I put the space was kind of mean and evil. :rolleyes:

i knew you would never be that mean, which is why my brain was having trouble processing it. the space was a joke, i understand! :D

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 09:19 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

Glad you scrolled. Hopefully I would never be that mean.
Of course, the way I put the space was kind of mean and evil. :rolleyes:

i knew you would never be that mean, which is why my brain was having trouble processing it. the space was a joke, i understand! :D

And you fell into the trap. :blush:

#29 Kay

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Posted 05 September 2007 - 10:14 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 07:17 AM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

#31 Kay

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 03:54 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 06:04 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

#33 Kay

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 06:14 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 07:55 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

Or Theodore, or Teddy...
:rolleyes: LOL :rolleyes:

#35 Kay

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 07:58 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

Or Theodore, or Teddy...
:rolleyes: LOL :rolleyes:

Theodore Adam ~~~~~~~
I wish you could know is last name.
His whole name flows beautifuly
I love it.
Not him.
We are only friends now.
I'm pround of my self.

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Posted 06 September 2007 - 09:37 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

Or Theodore, or Teddy...
:rolleyes: LOL :rolleyes:

Theodore Adam ~~~~~~~
I wish you could know is last name.
His whole name flows beautifuly
I love it.
Not him.
We are only friends now.
I'm pround of my self.

I am really happy to hear you are proud of yourself. That is great!!!!!!

#37 Kay

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Posted 07 September 2007 - 04:10 PM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

Or Theodore, or Teddy...
:rolleyes: LOL :rolleyes:

Theodore Adam ~~~~~~~
I wish you could know is last name.
His whole name flows beautifuly
I love it.
Not him.
We are only friends now.
I'm pround of my self.

I am really happy to hear you are proud of yourself. That is great!!!!!!

Yeah but I think I still like him

>>>>Reasons I'm pround: 1.) My heart doesn't pound when i hear his name
2.) I don't hink about him that much anymore<<<<


I'm pretty sure I might need theropy to get this dude out of my head

#38 Glowurm

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Posted 09 September 2007 - 12:17 AM

I read one of MK's songs and felt the urge to make a response song to it. It's not entirely about MK though, because if it was then the song would go from being nice to really mean and untrue. o_o;

---


Hey, you, guess what?
I see you there in the street
Doin’ drugs, no family
Well someone cares
Don’t know who, don’t know where,
But someone cares
Someone will always care

You there! Guess what?
I can hear you singing, alone
‘Bout your life and your troubles
Well someone cares
All your friends, don’t matter where,
We all care
We’ll always care

You’re sad, your life is bad
You’ve been had, you can’t quite grad
But someone
Somewhere
Will always care

Hey hey, we all have our troubles
We all have our sad times
When we think no-one cares
But we’re wrong, always wrong
Because someone cares,
Someone who will always care

Come here, guess what?
I can feel your hurting
Your sorrows filling your soul
I really care
I can’t stand to see you sad!
I will care!
I’ll always care.

Listen to me, guess what?
I can see you, hiding in plain view
Trying to keep your feelings inside
We all care
You can reveal your thoughts to us
‘Cause we care
Someone will always care

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Posted 09 September 2007 - 12:22 AM

I'm sorry to disagree with you... those lyrics are not good...









they are PHENOMENAL !!!!!

horatio, when i first read your post i didn't scroll down all the way and i was like "how could horatio say something like that?" so i read the lyrics all over again and thought the same thing..."i can't picture horatio saying something like that!" then i finally scrolled down and i was like "oh! ok!"
LOL
:P

OHMIGOSH!ILIKE,TOTALLYDITHESAMETHING!!!ISN'TTHATHILARIOUS??!?!?!?

*looks over and sees the evil Horatio chuckling in the corner*

HEY, I have an evil twin too!!! his name is Teddeldore.....~waits for people, and animals, and dairy products, and whatever else exists on this sit, to laugh~

*wonders how sensitive Teddeldore's sense of smell is*

Why?
Can you guess who Teddeldore is???
Gosh! every time I read that I keep on wanting to say teladore.
~grrrr....~

Or Theodore, or Teddy...
:rolleyes: LOL :rolleyes:

Theodore Adam ~~~~~~~
I wish you could know is last name.
His whole name flows beautifuly
I love it.
Not him.
We are only friends now.
I'm pround of my self.

I am really happy to hear you are proud of yourself. That is great!!!!!!

Yeah but I think I still like him

>>>>Reasons I'm pround: 1.) My heart doesn't pound when i hear his name
2.) I don't hink about him that much anymore<<<<


I'm pretty sure I might need theropy to get this dude out of my head

On a completely unrelated topic, I was on a petsite that's really new and I saw someone called Kay. And I thought, "Oh! Kay! I know someone called Kay!"

=D

Remind me, how old are you?

And on another completely unrelated topic, is Teddy Geiger your favorite singer of all time? xD

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Posted 09 September 2007 - 08:10 AM

I read one of MK's songs and felt the urge to make a response song to it. It's not entirely about MK though, because if it was then the song would go from being nice to really mean and untrue. o_o;

---


Hey, you, guess what?
I see you there in the street
Doin’ drugs, no family
Well someone cares
Don’t know who, don’t know where,
But someone cares
Someone will always care

You there! Guess what?
I can hear you singing, alone
‘Bout your life and your troubles
Well someone cares
All your friends, don’t matter where,
We all care
We’ll always care

You’re sad, your life is bad
You’ve been had, you can’t quite grad
But someone
Somewhere
Will always care

Hey hey, we all have our troubles
We all have our sad times
When we think no-one cares
But we’re wrong, always wrong
Because someone cares,
Someone who will always care

Come here, guess what?
I can feel your hurting
Your sorrows filling your soul
I really care
I can’t stand to see you sad!
I will care!
I’ll always care.

Listen to me, guess what?
I can see you, hiding in plain view
Trying to keep your feelings inside
We all care
You can reveal your thoughts to us
‘Cause we care
Someone will always care

This is soooooo great! You are really talented Glowurm!!!!!!




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