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#1 Glowurm

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 02:21 AM

I like to write lyrics sometimes. So I thought, hey, why not put them somewhere so that someone might give a ####? I'll put my lyrics here whenever I come up with any.

All lyrics posted by me are Evan B. Please don't use or repost them without crediting moi. Blah, blah, legal, blah. Just don't flat out steal these, get the gist of it?

Have some tasty lyric thingos, yeah? Omnomnomnomnom. I thought so.

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 10:09 AM

This ain't some kind of wine 'n dine
You have no real reason to cry
Your life is great
You can't relate
To anyone who's having a hard time

Someone will always have a better life then you
But that doesn't mean that yours stinks
Someone will always have a worse life, it's true
But you still haven't run out of luck
You're only full of drama
It really hurts your karma
When you whine about life
Even though you're in no strife

You say you're being sympathetic
I say you're acting empathetic
I used to be just apathetic
But now you really look pathetic
For many months I used to give a ****
But now only when it seems fit
To not look like I hate you
And so it satiates you

This ain't some kind of wine 'n dine
You have no real reason to cry
Your life is great
You can't relate
To anyone who's having a hard time

You never cared about yourself
But yet you're so selfish
You're getting high because others have lows
Drinking just because you don't know
You never really looked cool, oh oh
Anorexic and bulimic and so and so
There's nothing really wrong with your life
So stop acting so...

DUMB!

This ain't some kind of wine 'n dine
You have no real reason to cry
Your life is great
You can't relate
To anyone who's having a hard time

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I hope you get the pun in the chorus. It's not particularly subtle or anything.

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 10:29 AM

They say that there's a song for every mood
I guess I don't know enough
Nothing can describe this feeling
Nothing in your life
It's not love, not hate, not regret and not joy
Not confusion, not depression, not enough for this boy

Too much a load is on my mind
Stress is eating me from inside
I don't want to have to do this
But I'm not allowed to leave it
There's nowhere I can go
No way that I can do what I like
I'm trapped in the largest island
Lonely in the smallest continent

They tell me to write an essay
It's due in a week
Halfway through I break down
I'm feeling far too weak
I don't get it, there's no reason, that I should be, in this season
But I just can't, seem to help it, when my best friends, hate my guts

Too much a load is on my mind
Stress is eating me from inside
I don't want to have to do this
But I'm not allowed to leave it
There's nowhere I can go
No way that I can do what I like
I'm trapped in the largest island
Lonely in the smallest continent

I used to hang out with those I liked
That didn't last a day
I used to hang out with those I didn't
It lasted until yesterday
How could I, be so hated, that ev'ryone, moves away
Is it true that, I'm so ugly, that I must be, pushed today

Too much a load is on my mind
Stress is eating me from inside
I don't want to have to do this
But I'm not allowed to leave it
There's nowhere I can go
No way that I can do what I like
I'm trapped in the largest island
Lonely in the smallest continent

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True story.

Have I told anyone that I make these lyrics up on the spot? Haven't even put this thing through a spell checker.

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 11:52 AM

WOW!!! Those are truly fantastic lyrics. You are quite talented. Whether it be with your stories or your lyrics,
you definitely have a way with words.

I can't wait for Mushroom_king to read them. She will really be able to come up with some wonderful music.
Perhaps Dog lover would like to put your lyrics to piano.

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 08:14 PM

Someone will always have a better life then you
But that doesn't mean that yours stinks
Someone will always have a worse life, it's true
But you still haven't run out of luck
You're only full of drama
It really hurts your karma
When you whine about life
Even though you're in no strife

Actually, I needed the word that I used instead of stinks in there so that it would rhyme.

I'm a fan of rhyming songs ^_^

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Posted 03 August 2007 - 10:37 PM

Someone will always have a better life then you
But that doesn't mean that yours stinks
Someone will always have a worse life, it's true
But you still haven't run out of luck
You're only full of drama
It really hurts your karma
When you whine about life
Even though you're in no strife

Actually, I needed the word that I used instead of stinks in there so that it would rhyme.

I'm a fan of rhyming songs ^_^

I know, but I couldn't keep it in.
My apologies.

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 04:20 AM

Someone will always have a better life then you
But that doesn't mean that yours stinks
Someone will always have a worse life, it's true
But you still haven't run out of luck
You're only full of drama
It really hurts your karma
When you whine about life
Even though you're in no strife

Actually, I needed the word that I used instead of stinks in there so that it would rhyme.

I'm a fan of rhyming songs ^_^

I know, but I couldn't keep it in.
My apologies.

Shame.

*updates the topic*

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 04:40 AM

You look at me strangely
When I ask you how you feel
You tell me that someone's hurt you
But you never say what they did
It's nothing but a mystery for me
Using deceit and seduction just so I can shut you up
It's never that bad so why'd you have to keep it from me?
You're just proving

My life is just a dumb whodunnit
Except I know who, but not the crime
The motivation and result aren't so obvious
The only thing I know is that nothings fine

You expect me to figure everything out
You reveal subtle clues but nothing big
"He's too heavy" means obsessive
And "I feel rejected" means you hate her
When I ask them to the face they ask me
"What do you know?" And when I just don't tell them
Well there goes another friend
You're just making

My life up to be a dumb whodunnit
Except I know who, but not the crime
The motivation and result aren't so obvious
The only thing I know is that nothings fine

When you ask me for advice I give it to you.
When I ask you for the same you say "I dunno."
When I say that back to you it's just, "You're no help."
If I use that upon you you get insulted way too much.
Am I some old and kindly fortune teller?
Or some sherlock holmes you use to find out about your friends?
What they say and do behind your back, I don't care
Just stop using me and maybe your life'll seem fair

You made my life into a dumb whodunnit
Except I know who, but not the crime
The motivation and result aren't so obvious
The only thing I know is that nothings fine

Oh my life is just a dumb whodunnit
Except I know who, but not the crime
The motivation and result aren't so obvious
The only thing I know is that nothings fine

My life is just a dumb whodunnit
My life is just a dumb whodunnit
My life is just a dumb whodunnit
My life is just a dumb whodunnit

I know who, but not the crime
I know who, but not the crime
I know who, but not the crime

The motivation and result aren't so obvious
The motivation and result aren't so obvious

The only thing I know is that nothings fine

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Again, true story.

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 06:22 AM

:blink: :blink: :blink:
wow... your lyrics are incredible.
*hands Glowurm The Blue Moon Award*
I am sorry to hear those lyrics come from a true situation.

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 11:38 AM

WOW!!! Those are truly fantastic lyrics. You are quite talented. Whether it be with your stories or your lyrics,
you definitely have a way with words.

I can't wait for Mushroom_king to read them. She will really be able to come up with some wonderful music.
Perhaps Dog lover would like to put your lyrics to piano.

then i'd be like elton john!!! :D :D :D

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 11:52 AM

WOW!!! Those are truly fantastic lyrics. You are quite talented. Whether it be with your stories or your lyrics,
you definitely have a way with words.

I can't wait for Mushroom_king to read them. She will really be able to come up with some wonderful music.
Perhaps Dog lover would like to put your lyrics to piano.

then i'd be like elton john!!! :D :D :D

Exactly!!!!!!!
I bet you could do a great job putting the lyrics to music. :D

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 01:49 PM

nice

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Posted 04 August 2007 - 09:04 PM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

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Posted 05 August 2007 - 12:45 PM

WOW!!! Those are truly fantastic lyrics. You are quite talented. Whether it be with your stories or your lyrics,
you definitely have a way with words.

I can't wait for Mushroom_king to read them. She will really be able to come up with some wonderful music.
Perhaps Dog lover would like to put your lyrics to piano.

then i'd be like elton john!!! :D :D :D

Exactly!!!!!!!
I bet you could do a great job putting the lyrics to music. :D

....except that i've never done that...
i guess i could try

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Posted 05 August 2007 - 03:13 PM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

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Posted 05 August 2007 - 04:33 PM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

*~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~*

Don't you understand? Music is poetry.
Songs are poems you sing. Poems are songs that you talk. Great grammar I have there -_-

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Posted 05 August 2007 - 05:44 PM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

*~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~*

Don't you understand? Music is poetry.
Songs are poems you sing. Poems are songs that you talk. Great grammar I have there -_-

*~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~*




That was deep.
Yea I know poetry is music from the heart. But mine are all short. Have you read any of them? But I guess one that I wrote could be a song. It's just coming up with the chorus and lyrics for the bridge is kind of hard for me. idk. I just can't.......idk, I can't explain it.

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Posted 05 August 2007 - 09:22 PM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

*~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~*

Don't you understand? Music is poetry.
Songs are poems you sing. Poems are songs that you talk. Great grammar I have there -_-

*~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~*




That was deep.
Yea I know poetry is music from the heart. But mine are all short. Have you read any of them? But I guess one that I wrote could be a song. It's just coming up with the chorus and lyrics for the bridge is kind of hard for me. idk. I just can't.......idk, I can't explain it.

Not all songs have bridges

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Posted 06 August 2007 - 06:23 AM

WOW!!! Those are truly fantastic lyrics. You are quite talented. Whether it be with your stories or your lyrics,
you definitely have a way with words.

I can't wait for Mushroom_king to read them. She will really be able to come up with some wonderful music.
Perhaps Dog lover would like to put your lyrics to piano.

then i'd be like elton john!!! :D :D :D

Exactly!!!!!!!
I bet you could do a great job putting the lyrics to music. :D

....except that i've never done that...
i guess i could try

I'd love to hear what you come up with! =D

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Posted 06 August 2007 - 06:28 AM

nice

Thanks.

They're fun to write. I envy you for being able to put your lyrics to music.

I envy both of you.
I can't write songs or music. Although I do write poems I still can't make them song-ish.

*~*The Grand Illusion*~*The Final Cut*~*

Don't you understand? Music is poetry.
Songs are poems you sing. Poems are songs that you talk. Great grammar I have there -_-

*~*The Psychedelic Luau*~*The Astronomy Domine*~*

That was deep.
Yea I know poetry is music from the heart. But mine are all short. Have you read any of them? But I guess one that I wrote could be a song. It's just coming up with the chorus and lyrics for the bridge is kind of hard for me. idk. I just can't.......idk, I can't explain it.

Not all songs have bridges

I don't like writing in bridges.

Just... Hearing them. xP




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